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Jeff Rensch's avatar

I love your posts. Re rhymesters I believe Sondheim is our best (I’m not a fan of his work but the rhymes are heavenly).

Best is in the very underrated Do I hear a waltz?:

I do hear a waltz

I want more than to hear a waltz

Best rhyme ever, do and to within the lines.

Also of course: In the depression was I depressed, nowhere near

I met a financier

and I’m here.

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Rob Gerrand's avatar

Chaucer rhymes:

A KNYGHT ther was, and that a worthy man,

That fro the tyme that he first bigan

To riden out, he loved chivalrie,

Trouthe and honour, fredom and curteisie.

Ful worthy was he in his lordes werre,

And therto hadde he riden, no man ferre,

As wel in cristendom as in hethenesse,

And evere honoured for his worthynesse;

As does Shakespeare when it suits him, and not just the Sonnets or The Rape of Lucrece.

FROM the besieged Ardea all in post,

Borne by the trustless wings of false desire,

Lust-breathed Tarquin leaves the Roman host,

And to Collatium bears the lightless fire

Which, in pale embers hid, lurks to aspire

And girdle with embracing flames the waist

Of Collatine's fair love, Lucrece the chaste.

So I suspect that you are right in your categorisation of Levine's take as being far too restrictive.

Here's one of my poems on this topic:

Is verse then meant to be obscure?

if clearly understood it’s weak

but if you have to puzzle it

and wrack your brains for half a week

then surely it must be most wise

or sage, to have it so disguised

the language snobs recoil with turned up nose

if the verse has rhymes, and doesn’t sound like prose

broken into a random line

let them seek and find the hidden pearls

they won’t cast them before us common swine

but guard them costively and rarely bring them out

maybe whisper them. Too undignified to shout.

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